Friday, November 03, 2006

Here is my first example of our BEST!

If Only Jorge

Ever wondered what would have happened
IF only I had understood her smile
IF only I could read her mind
IF only I had said those few words which meant so much to her
IF only I had taken that first kiss
IF only I had said "I LOVE U"
IF only I had not lied when she said it
IF only I could have said sorry
IF only I knew when she needed me most
IF only she would ever understand what I felt for her
IF only she could get married to me despite all the above IFs
IF only dreams could come true
IF only I could keep writing forever, but I wont...
Ever wondered what would have happened
if we could go back in life and Rewrite each IF..

(22 approved)

5 comments:

Julia T. said...

thats so0 good i really like it. love you
deanna

Julia T. said...

this poem belongs in a greating card. this is the best love poem i have ever heard. keep doing your thang.


javie



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Julia T. said...

GOOD JOB

Julia T. said...

JORGE THIS IS SO CUTE
CAYLA

Julia T. said...

thats really really really good i love you
deanna